Wednesday, June 19, 2013

Boredom - Lapedra Tolson


3 comments:

  1. Nice job tying it back to the theme.
    We need focus on the hand. It's a significant part of the image.

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  3. “To-Do-List Doom”

    I’ve ben here! I’ve done this! This photo literally made me laugh out loud. There are days when I say to myself, I am going to be productive. I am going to get something done. Not only will I be productive I am going to make a list of my productivity. Making the list itself is a distraction from what I need to do. I get bored. I find a pillow. I sleep. Well, sometimes. Which is why I named it as such. What works with this is the clear distraction and boredom of trying to stay focused. I think what could have been improved was maybe the levels. I think making the paper’s white pop would have also made the ink look cleaner. I also think the image could have been sharpened a little. I think I like the hand in the picture just needs to be a little more focused if it’s going to be apart of the image.

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